I love this game. It's very cute and also very fun.
The main problem I have with it, though, is that it's really frustrating to get anywhere in the story, because you die so much just trying to get to work or school. I've got seven out of nine endings so far, and I've almost given up on the other three because I keep dying at the office. Stupid burglar. But then there's the bigger problem of getting to the office in the first place-- I seem to die like 70% of the time if I drive (is that the actual statistic in the game or am I just unlucky?), and I was horrified by the "walking" death and never chose to walk to work or school again after that.
I really liked the endings other than the walking ending and the driving ending. They were really creative and clever. I particularly loved Aleatte's face in the "staying at home" ending, he was just like "Not again..."
The animation is adorable, and the game itself is really easy to look at, if you can even understand that. One thing is that the teacher's mouth looks a bit weird when she's talking, because it's just changing size and moving around on her face, but maybe that's just me being picky.
One thing that you might do is, when he walks to work or school and he's not going to die in the crosswalk, maybe have him look both ways before he crosses? Because if there's a crossing light, we can't see it. And it's just a little nerve-wracking when it looks like he's going to cross safely, he's halfway across... and then he splatters. :x
I guess critiques should probably be more than just really long comments, right? xD Sorry! Maybe one day I'll get the hang of it.